High Diving Giraffes

We watched this short movie and wrote a description on it, check it out!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nPrWo5pEvyk

 The adorable, yellow, spotty, galloping giraffes tip toed on the beautiful ramp! One giraffe hopped on another giraffe and did a back flip into the blue water! The flexible giraffes took turns diving and back flipping into the beautiful, cool, blue, refreshing water. - Bella

 The spotty, spectacular giraffes galloped quietly up the shiny ramp. Then they back flipped into the refreshing pool and they drank the cool water.
- Ben

 The cheeky, elegant giraffes are high diving off a diving board into a swirling pool. It looks like a current! The giraffes are walking up the ramp in the swimming cinema. The lanky, spotty giraffes are backflipping into the deep, light blue pool. The sports star giraffes had a drink before they were going to flip again. 

 - Mackenzie



Comments

  1. Wendy HuriwaiMay 7, 2019 at 2:43 AM

    You have chosen some great 'wow words' to describe the giraffes, Bella. They were very flexible and graceful.

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  2. Wendy HuriwaiMay 7, 2019 at 2:45 AM

    I love the adverb you added to galloped, Ben. They were extremely quiet. Mrs Huriwai

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  3. Wendy HuriwaiMay 7, 2019 at 2:46 AM

    You've used a very appropriate adjective to describe the giraffes, Mackenzie - 'lanky'
    Mrs Huriwai

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  4. Mrs Courtney-McLeodMay 7, 2019 at 4:29 PM

    "Bella, I like that you used the word refreshing" - Archie

    Mrs Signal's writing children, you are using some fantastic WOW words in your stories.

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  5. RebeccaMay 8, 2019 at 8:19 PM

    Great writing everyone! Love the way you have described the giraffes.

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