WOW words - Crocodile writing with Miss Courtney


"We have been learning to use WOW words in our stories to make them more interesting. " - Fynn



"We started with a simple sentence and then added WOW words to make it more interesting and detailed." - Caleb 


 
Rylan - The gigantic hungry crocodile is trying to eat the scared man. 

 
Mary- The scary crocodile is trying to eat the terrified man. 

 
Theo - The big long crocodile is trying to eat the scared man. 

 
Archie - The greedy and humongous crocodile is super. He or she is trying to eat the brave man. 


Comments

  1. Sarah SignalMay 8, 2019 at 12:07 AM

    Oh my goodness, what a scary picture. You guys have used some fantastic WOW words, I especially liked 'terrified' and 'humongous'. Do you think the man got away on his boat? I sure hope so...

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  2. Sarah SignalMay 8, 2019 at 2:50 PM

    Adele says, " I like your stories, next time you could try to add some exclamation marks".

    Putauaki says, "Archie, I like the way you used the word Brave".

    Kelicia says, "I like your stories, next time I'd like to see a little bit more".

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  3. AnonymousMay 11, 2019 at 7:08 PM

    You have made my day by sharing your stories - thank you. I like how you have used WOW words to describe the crocodile and the man. I'm sure glad I wasn't in that boat!

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  4. Mrs ParkMay 19, 2019 at 10:00 PM

    You used superb wow words in your writing. Love to read more of them. Keep up the good work!

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