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Yesterday we tried strawberry chocolate balls. They looked amazing, I wanted to eat it straight away. They were rock solid and very hard. They smelt like candy canes. They looked like little snow balls and they tasted like they had jelly inside. - Theo  

 Yesterday I ate strawberry chocolate balls and they looked like a little pink egg. They felt sticky, breakable and hard. They smelt like marshmallows and strawberries. Thank you for letting us have a strawberry chocolate ball. They tasted like a piece of gum. - Tyson R

The strawberry ball looks like a strawberry play ball. It felt like hard wood and smelt like strawberry sunflowers. They tasted like bubble gum. - Marinelle



Comments

  1. AnonymousAugust 18, 2019 at 5:21 PM

    Malo lele my name is Scarlett from team toi toi i like your work that is amazing I wish I had some from Scarlett.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 18, 2019 at 5:41 PM

    Greetings te mauru e taki nei I love what you guys have done there
    I would love to watch you eat strawberry chocolate balls,and
    I wish I could be there eating strawberry chocolate balls too (;but I have
    to take lessons in class ): I have a question what
    is the whiteboard for?
    next time they should of
    put their whiteboard close to the camera so people can see what
    is the whiteboard is for.-_- from lee chin in team Toi toi

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    1. Mrs Courtney-McLeodSeptember 18, 2019 at 3:01 PM

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    2. Mrs Courtney-McLeodSeptember 18, 2019 at 3:03 PM

      We use the whiteboard as our planning tool to help us when we write our stories. We wrote our WOW words on our whiteboard to describe the way the strawberry chocolate balls, looked, felt, smelt and tasted like. Thank you so much for your comment!

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2019 at 5:28 PM

    Hi Te Mauru e Taki nei, it’s Kaia, I like your strawberry balls because it’s interesting. How did you Mayck them?

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    1. Mrs Courtney-McLeodSeptember 18, 2019 at 3:02 PM

      We were lucky because Miss Courtney got them from the supermarket for us! Thanks for your question Kaia.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2019 at 6:40 PM

    Ola it’s Olly from team toi toi I like the way you said it was amazing and how tasted next time you could add some pictures of you makeing it

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